Today I want to tell you about my friends during I am in Maahad Hamidiah .
Hope you'll enjoy !
Okay,
Firstly , when I enter this school , I don't know anyone .. until I met my old friend , SAFUAN SAMAD .. From that moment I began to enjoy become a student at MH . Hehe
Initially I felt so awkward because of the environment at the new school . After all , I'm new students at here.
Two day letters I started to became a hostel student and since that day I make friends with maahad students .. one by one .. and since then A NEW FRIENDSHIP WAS BORN .. Fraternity began to establish ..
AND NOW
after they got their result in PMR . They all decided to leave me , to leave Maahad Hamidiah ... At First , I was so sad .. but when I thought back .. there may be wisdom ... huhu but never mind I will contact them until I entered adulthood .. Hehehe
The
1) M.Amirul Shamil B. Shahrin . (Malay red shirt)
5) M. Amir B. Daud
6) M.Amirul Anwar B. Badrul Hisham
7) Abdullah Asim B. Che Abdul Rahim
8) M.Hafizuddin B. Md Jaki
9 ) M.Nor Hazim B. Abu Bakar
10) M. Amir Zharif B. Yusoff & M. Arshad B. Atan
12) M. Amin Khairuzain B. Khairul Anuar
13) A. Haziq B. Edhan
Where's amir daud? Haha. Kbye.
ReplyDeletehye Fauzul,
ReplyDeleteThanks for creating this blog..it looks cool!
i hope you will continue writing in English ok!
Good job =)
COrrections:-
ReplyDelete1) Today I want to tell you about my friends during I in MAAHAD HAMIDIAH
Today, i want to tell you about my friends during i am in maahad Hamidiah
2)until i met my old friends, Safuan Samad
Just one, so no need to put 's' at the back of the word 'friend'..
* until i met my old friend, Safuan Samad
2) It was initially I feel so so so awkward because the environment at the new school .
you describe the past event, so, please write in past tense..feel= felt
because of, dont, dont forget to put 'of' ok..hehe
*Initially, i felt so awkward because of the environment at the new school
3) after all new students
if we translate, after all means 'rupa-rupanya' or 'kerana' or 'akhirnya'. what do you mean by after all new students? maybe you can change the sentence so that it becomes grammatically correct..=)
4) after them got their result
after they got their result
* we use 'they' instead of 'them'. Remember 'they' comes in front of the sentence, and 'them' comes at the back of the sentence.
if you are not clear, feel free to come and see me ok! Good luck for y0ur next writing..=)
Amany : I forgot him ... Haha .. Sorry Amir
ReplyDeleteTeacher As : Thanks for the advice ...
Anas : Really ? Thanks .